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24 10, 2016

21 Grammar Rules and Writing Mistakes

By |2016-10-01T14:36:48-05:00October 24th, 2016|Make Me Think Monday, writing, Writing Craft|2 Comments

Grammarcheck.net recently posted this infographic of 21 frequently ignored (or unknown) grammar rules and writing mistakes that everyone who writes should know.

How many do you know? How many do you ignore?

I’m with them on all but the serial comma and semicolon. I only use a serial comma for clarity in my writing. And, I think the semicolon is too formal for my voice. I only add it when my copy editor insists.

Bye Grammar Mistakes! 21 Rules to Remember (Infographic)
Source: www.grammarcheck.net

21 10, 2016

Ankle Alphabet

By |2016-10-13T11:26:23-05:00October 21st, 2016|Miller Farm Friday|0 Comments

Blog by Chicken Wrangler Sara

I am now doing the rehab exercises for my fractured ankle.

Having been through physical therapy five years ago when I sprained the same ankle, I was allowed to do the exercises at home. Therapy involves some stretches and writing the alphabet.

Writing the alphabet was the most challenging exercise because my left ankle is the one fractured. I am right-handed so figuring out how to “write” the alphabet with my left foot is difficult.

As I was trying to remember which way a “j” curves, I thought of the Chinese student living with us this year. If he sprains his ankle, will he have to “write” with his ankle in Chinese? chinese-jSomehow a plain English “j” seems less complicated.

17 10, 2016

Who reads Romance?

By |2016-10-02T16:13:14-05:00October 17th, 2016|Make Me Think Monday|0 Comments

I read a blog recently where  certain elements of the blogger’s stories were listed with the question, Are you my reader? That got me to thinking about who reads romance.

According to Maya Rodale, “It is a truth universally acknowledged that romance readers are single women in possession of cats and in want of a man.”

I’m a long time romance reader and neither truth applies to me.

She adds, “Other “true” facts about the romance reader: They’re “nice people with bad taste in books”, uneducated, bored, stupid, “lack romance in their lives.” Or if we want to be really specific, they’re “middle aged women who are bored in their marriages and want to fantasize about hard, chiseled men.” Or maybe they’re “younger women who are using them as emotional porn.”

None of those characteristics apply to me either.

So who reads romance?

Romance Writers of America did a survey and created the graph below to identify romance novel readers. These  demographics are a closer match to who I am as a romance reader.

If you’re a romance reader, do the stats fit you?

BTW, if you’re interested, you can read the rest of Ms. Rodale’s humorous post on romance reader myths and truths here.

 

14 10, 2016

Chicken Slide

By |2016-10-09T21:08:48-05:00October 14th, 2016|Miller Farm Friday|1 Comment

Blog by Chicken Wrangler Sara

The past few weeks have been difficult on Miller Farm.

Chicken Wrangler Sara’s sprained ankle ended up having a fracture. This has the daily routine a bit of a challenge.

Then we had a situation arise that has required tremendous emotional energy. I found myself going into survival mode – making it from one day to the next.

One morning I was letting the chickens out and wishing I could crawl back in bed.  Most of the chickens had run out of the coop when I saw one hen sliding down the ramp.slide

I had to smile in spite of all that is happening.

I can always count on the chickens to provide humor when it is needed most.

12 10, 2016

Words and Fall Leaves

By |2016-10-12T21:50:34-05:00October 12th, 2016|Wednesday Words of Wisdom|1 Comment

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I like this quote from Ruth Ozeki, American-Canadian novelist, filmmaker and Zen Buddhist priest, and the wonderful graphic Edie Melson created from her words.

This time of year I watch from my office window as leaves in the Rio Grande National Forest fall, scattering and covering the forest floor. Inside, sitting at my computer, I peck away at the computer keys and the words appear on the screen like those falling leaves.

Soon snow will cover the leaves on the forest floor or the wind will scatter them over the ridge. Hopefully, my words will fall into place and become a completed book.

10 10, 2016

What are your chances of success?

By |2016-10-02T16:12:43-05:00October 10th, 2016|Monday Motivations|2 Comments

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Looking at this graphic you can clearly see what a world of difference attitude and action can make in success. The I wish I could  circle gives you only a 30% opportunity for succeeding while the I am circle gives you a 90% chance of success. Thanks to The UnNovelist.com for the motivation.

Which circle describes where you are with your latest project?

Me, I’m at 90% and determined to get this story finished and to the editor before the holidays.

5 10, 2016

Progress and Change

By |2016-10-01T16:21:57-05:00October 5th, 2016|Wednesday Words of Wisdom|0 Comments

shaw-changeI don’t know about where you live, but here in the Rocky Mountain Forest things are changing. While I’m not looking forward to the winter, I do look forward to the change.

Can you feel the change of season where you are? Are you ready and willing for the change?

I hope so because I truly believe Mr. Shaw’s words. Without acceptance of change (and I mean more than the weather), we do not move forward.

3 10, 2016

Elmore Leonard’s Rules for Good Writing

By |2016-10-01T16:00:32-05:00October 3rd, 2016|Make Me Think Monday|0 Comments

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SOURCE for image: http://www.cnn.com/2012/01/20/living/elmore-leonard-author-interview/

Elmore Leonard (1925-2013) began writing Westerns  in the 1950s. From those, he went on to specialized in crime novels and suspense thrillers.

Because of his trademark rhythm and pace, many of his short stories became films. You might recognize Get Shorty (1995, John Travolta and Gene Hackman); Jackie Brown (1997, Pam Grier,) and Out of Sight (1999, George Clooney and Jennifer Lopez).

He also wrote scripts for television.

That’s how I became acquainted with the writer’s work through U. S. Marshal Raylan Givens, star of the television series Justified.Trigger-happy Marshal Raylan exemplifies the author’s use of the Western theme inside crime fiction.

The character first appeared in Leonard’s novel PRONTO (1993), again in RIDING THE RAP (1995), and RAYLAN (2012). He resurfaced as the main character of the short story “Fire in the Hole” (2012) which screenwriters used as the basis for the television series.

If you’ve watched the series, you’ll remember Raylan’s Stetson Open Road. It’s said that Leonard was particularly keen that the producers of the TV show get Raylan’s hat right, an indication of the hat’s importance in Raylan’s characterization.

Btw, Leonard won the 2010 Peabody Award for Justified.

As a writer, Leonard was skilled at gritty, realistic dialogue and a master of the tight scene. He gave the reader immediate access to a character’s thoughts, what we call deep POV today.

The thing that impresses me most about Mr. Leonard is, unlike most genre writers, he is taken seriously by the literary crowd.

In his 2007 book, he offered 10 tricks for good writing:

  1. Never open a book with weather.
  2. Avoid prologues.
  3. Never use a verb other than “said” to carry dialogue.
  4. Never use an adverb to modify the verb “said”…he admonished gravely.
  5. Keep your exclamation points under control. You are allowed no more than two or three per 100,000 words of prose.
  6. Never use the words “suddenly” or “all hell broke loose.”
  7. Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly.
  8. Avoid detailed descriptions of characters.
  9. Don’t go into great detail describing places and things.
  10. Try to leave out the part that readers tend to skip.

He then summed those ten rules into one:

If it sounds like writing, I rewrite it.

Personally, I like his summation best. What about you?

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